From 3b74fc2579806c95ab6ef63205030d540920da99 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Firebaugh Date: Wed, 17 Jul 2013 11:08:55 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Copy updates * Less !!! * Discourage copying from other sources * Don't mention creating a profile page * Don't explicitly instruct users to ask questions * Cut editor list * Refine note instructions --- app/views/site/welcome.html.erb | 1 - config/locales/en.yml | 41 +++++++++++++++------------------ 2 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/views/site/welcome.html.erb b/app/views/site/welcome.html.erb index d97b08d9a..8190ac1f8 100644 --- a/app/views/site/welcome.html.erb +++ b/app/views/site/welcome.html.erb @@ -83,7 +83,6 @@ <% else %>

<%= t "welcome_page.section_6.paragraph_1_no_user_html" %>

<% end %> -

<%= t "welcome_page.section_6.paragraph_2_html" %>

diff --git a/config/locales/en.yml b/config/locales/en.yml index f1fda0603..5a02fae87 100644 --- a/config/locales/en.yml +++ b/config/locales/en.yml @@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@ en: Unlike other maps, OpenStreetMap is completely created by people like you, and free for anyone to fix, update, download and use. - Here's a quick guide to get you started! + Here's a quick guide to get you started. section_1: title: 'One Map: Many Websites' paragraph_1_html: | @@ -1169,22 +1169,23 @@ en: section_2: title: What's on the Map on_html: | - OpenStreetMap is a place for any data that's both real and current - it includes - millions of buildings, roads, and other details about places. + OpenStreetMap is a place for mapping things that are both real and current - + it includes millions of buildings, roads, and other details about places. You can map + whatever real-world features are interesting to you. off_html: | - What it doesn't include is opinionated data, like ratings, or data that isn't - current, like historical buildings or hypothetical structures. + What it doesn't include is opinionated data like ratings, historical or + hypothetical features, and data from copyrighted sources. Unless you have special + permission, don't copy from online or paper maps. section_3: title: You're Signed Up title_no_user: Get a Free Account paragraph_1_html: | - To edit OpenStreetMap, you'll need a - free user account - sign up here. + To edit OpenStreetMap, you'll need a user account. + Sign up here. paragraph_2_html: | - With your user account, you can edit the map, - create a profile page, and - communicate with other people working on improving the map. + With your user account, you can edit the map and collaborate + with other mappers. section_4: title: Basic Terms For Mapping paragraph_1_html: | @@ -1202,30 +1203,24 @@ en: section_5: title: Any questions? paragraph_1_html: | - Need help mapping, or not clear on how to use OpenStreetMap? Feel free to ask on - the help website! + Need help mapping, or not clear on how to use OpenStreetMap? Get your questions answered + on the help website. section_6: title: Start Editing paragraph_1_html: | You can zoom in anywhere in the world and click the Edit button to start editing. paragraph_1_no_user_html: | - Once you have an account, you can zoom in anywhere in the world and click the Edit button - to start editing. - paragraph_2_html: | - Since OpenStreetMap is an open project, there are lots of different ways to edit the map - whether with - a web based editor like iD, or - on your iPhone with Pushpin, - or with your Android phone - with OsmAnd+. + Once you have an account, you can zoom in anywhere in the world and click the Edit + button to start editing. section_7: title: No Time To Edit? Add a Note! paragraph_1_html: | If you just want something small fixed and don't have the time to sign up and learn how to edit, it's - easy to add a note! + easy to add a note. paragraph_2_html: | Just go to the map and click 'Add a note' in the bottom-right corner. This will add a marker to the map, which you can move by dragging - the green plus sign. Click save to add a note, and experienced mappers will find and address your issue. + the green plus sign. Add your message, then click save, and other mappers will investigate. notifier: diary_comment_notification: subject: "[OpenStreetMap] %{user} commented on your diary entry" -- 2.39.5